minato kid story

your usual kid genius MC that FTGs in the battlefield like they're prime Minato.

This started out strong. But now Minato acts like Hiruzen and Mc bends over for Minato. Like dude is stronger than Minato but still bends over and gives his Arse to Minato, does everything daddy minato tells him to do, i can't recommend it.

Why this MC looked like Minato puppy? Where is Minato, there is he. MC get any jutsu. He gift this technique to Minato without any hesitation. I expect in the future he use Shiki fuujin on Kyuubi instead of Minato.

It’s a lot of timeline problems usually with fanfics as long as it’s close enough it fine but it’s hard to tell if it’s during the 2nd shinobi war or the 3rd. He wrote that minato is still a kid but kurenai is 14. The the current ino shika Cho team is the fathers of the ones in Naruto generation cool no problem but they are leading the front lines they didn’t take over the iwa frontline until the 3rd shinobi war so cool it’s the 3rd shinobi war then. Nope the next second you see white fang like wtf he died after the 2nd shinobi war so it must be the 2nd shinobi war right wrong because that doesn’t explain why the ino shika cho are so old nor does it explain why kurenai the very first female ninja he’s meeting is 12 years older then what she should be. If this was the 2nd shinobi war that would make half the canon characters from Naruto generation older putting them in the same generation as kakashi. So it’s the 3rd shinobi war but how is minato still a kid and white fang is still alive these kinds of timeline issues make the story harder to write later on when major canon events no longer makes sense. Like obito should die soon but minato has to be his teacher which means he’s not a kid but a grown adult. Other then the timeline issus its a good story and i like the mc character design.