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This could be a really good story but it is being held back majorly with word count inflation, repetition, rewording of the same information given before, and this happens for many chapters on end. In fact you have to read a lot of chapters to get to anything that moves the story forward and is not simply word count inflation. I finished the free chapters and don’t think it’s worth paying for the locked chapters because of the issues. If these issues didn’t exist, this would be an interesting read because the MC is mature, the world building has hints of interesting mechanics, and there is more realism than you see in these types of stories. Very disappointing that a good story is being handicapped by fluff and wordcount inflation.

Compared to other female protagonist stories out there this one was very bland and offers nothing new. I much preferred Genius Doctor: Black Belly Miss or Evil Emperors Wild Consort.

I almost skipped this one, way too many trash TV show fanfics lately. Although the whole inflation thing was overkill.

probably one of the best stories that I have read in a while. It makes me laugh, cry waking my sisters up with my full belly laughs when reading it late at night. Definitely encourage reading it