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Year 2056, in a city in the Yuan Jiang Su Jin area. On top of a ruined, shattered six story residential apartment sits a teenager wearing a combat vest, militaristic trousers, and alloyed battle boots. On his back is a hexagonal shield and equipped is a blood-shadow battle knife. He sits there silently on the edge of the roof. At this time, the sparkling sky was shining and there was a refreshing breath within the air that blew towards him. However, there was only silence within the ruined, deserted city, with an occasional howl that makes your heart skip a beat.
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ghost_kuro
2022-08-23

writing quality 1 star, story development 1 star, character design 1 star, stability of update 4 star, world background 3 star, i dont know why this story seems to make me dull. i cant really feel any excitement or any feeling reading this chapter. i only feel ANNOYED every time the MC lie to other people. so strong and op yet the only word that comes from the MC's mouth is a lie. there is only two words that i can use to describe the MC: COWARD & HYPOCRITE. to justify my reason because MC is a living liar that lies to everyone he meets. MC is scared of everything. MC always stated that he does not like to take the first initiative to cause trouble for someone who did not wrong him. But then because of his fear of danzo he decided to sacrifice the whole uchiha clan. why i rate so low because, in terms of writing quality its too much useless repetitive description. what I'm trying to say is : person B : the apple is a fruit. the apple has a shape. the apple two colors .the apple is either red or green. apple is only one of many fruits but still red apple is more preferable.Red apple are generally more sweet and slightly more heavier in terms of weight. person A : shocked by the realization of red apple is more preferable. persob B : (continues to repeat) after thinking about it green apple and red apple are also in high demand. To tell you the truth the fruit we need is an apple. We need to find out the shape of the apple. we need to investigate the difference between two colour of the apple. We also need to find more red apple because it is more preferable. because red apple is more sweet and heavier than green apple. this this the writing quality of this fanfic. very repetitive. as for character Design is very bland and Boring. Normally when we read about MC getting new powers as a reader we will be excited to see the MC using the powers or train his best in it. BUT in this fanfic i am already numb when i see the mc get a new power . for example. MC got paper jutsu on early chapter then suddenly after a few more chapters he still get the same paper jutsu from reading mind. YET, the MC acted shocked as if he got the jutsu for the first time. many jutsu are being recycle as if the MC did not realize it. there is no growth for MC(immature> mature attitude/mindset), because he always runs away and kept a low profile.very cowardly and boring to read.

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The Story of Christmas, Apple and Star
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2024-11-11 01:43
The Christmas story is often associated with giving and sharing. An apple can be related to Christmas in the sense that it can be a part of the festive treats. And the star is a very important symbol in Christmas, representing the Star of Bethlehem that guided the Wise Men to Jesus. Maybe in a story, a child on Christmas eve found an apple under a tree with a star - shaped ornament hanging above it, and it became a special moment of the Christmas celebration for the child.
What is the Connection between Christmas, Apple and Star in a Story?
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2024-11-11 06:06
In a Christmas story, the star might lead someone to a special place where they find a magical apple. The star could be the guiding light, just as the Star of Bethlehem guided the shepherds. And the apple could represent a gift or a discovery. For example, a poor man follows the star on Christmas night and comes across an apple tree that has the most beautiful apples. He takes one apple, and it brings him good luck for the rest of the year.
What is the connection between Christmas, apple and star in a story?
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2024-11-10 09:51
Well, the star is often associated with the magic and hope of Christmas. The apple can be part of the Christmas celebration in a way that it might be used to decorate or given as a treat. For example, a story could be that a magical star led a child to a special apple tree where the apples had the power to make Christmas wishes come true. The star gives direction and the apple is the object of discovery and celebration.
Can you tell a story about Christmas, apple and star?
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2024-11-10 06:26
Sure. One Christmas, a little girl found a shiny apple under a Christmas tree. The apple had a strange mark on it that looked like a star. She decided to take the apple and share it with her family. As they ate the apple, they told stories about how the star on the apple might be a sign of good luck for the new year.
What is the 'the christmas apple story' about?
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2024-12-13 13:02
The 'the christmas apple story' might be about the significance of apples during Christmas. Maybe it's about a special tradition where apples are given as gifts, or perhaps there's a legend related to apples and Christmas spirit. For example, in some cultures, apples symbolize health and prosperity, and during Christmas, they could be part of the celebration in a unique way.
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