tobirama x madara lemon fanfiction

its good however it would be better if hashirama,madara and sealed him and later after 60 years he would break the seal and he would be legend like hashirama,madara however shun bigger legend that defeated Hashirama,Madara,Tobirama,Senju Clan Alone

Useless drama and stupid things to do as a transmigrator facing against tobirama one on one how stupid is he rather he would have fought the main combat force and join force with madara to fight tobirama and forced plot.

The story is pretty good. Not top tier or anything, but a solid fanfic with an OP MC. The MC is Tobirama, both in mind and body. The transmigrators personality was pretty much completely overwritten- or maybe he was already like Tobirama idk. The only issue I have is that many of the antagonists are stupid. *SPOILER* at one point, the land of fire has the strength of Tobirama (who is at six paths level), Madara, and Hashirama, all fully resurrected and at their peaks. Tobirama and Madara both have the Rinnegan and are fighting on the same sides. Yet people like Mifune, the various Daimyos, other minor villains still think they have a chance against Konoha. It’s just absolutely ridiculous. *SPOILER* The plot with Orochimaru was very forced too, but it ended alright anyway. Tobirama let him get away after their initial fight, but planted a FTG mark on him. But Orochimaru removed it.

i shoudve dropped when tobirama killed mc it shoudve continued as a village building unifying the ninja world eliminating threats and the story of madara, mc, and mito

Why try to revive everbody it was going good until you started talking about reviving hashirama, tobirama, nawaki, and madara. You are also planning to add them to the groupchat making it too many people.