dialogue format novel

author the text format is difficult to read and follow, improve grammar and dialogue, it is difficult to follow the novel author the text format is difficult to read and follow, improve grammar and dialogue, it is difficult to follow the novel

I stopped reading as soon as the writer started with the dialogues. These dialogue format just makes the writer seem really lazy. What is with these newer fictions always being written in this terrible style and format

i like it, but the writing format makes it kinda hard for me to read, especially if its a 'thought' dialogue. as an advice, maybe try use italic to differentiate between a normal dialogue and thought. Keep up the good work author 👍👍👍👍

This is really mediocre, just waist time . Thankfully the format for dialogue is good and the punctuation is almost always there But other than that, it's the typical bull

The idea is not bad, but had to give up. The dialogues are way too confusing (different dialogue format instead in quotations), in need of editing and grammatical fixing.