"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
Well, this novel can't be called bad but it definitely cannot be called good. A bit below average in my opinion. I'm not talking about the quality of plot or character design blah blah blah. No, I'm talking about the fact that the writing is done in stage dialogue. It breaks the immersion and makes you really upset and irritated. Not much can be said about the stability of updates either. I also didn't like the fact that the mc can switch between faunus and human form freely. I'd rather have him as fully human or faunus(in this case, faunus would be better cuz the author wanted to give a bloodline to the mc). This is because while it's cool to switch between human and faunus, it wouldn't work in RWBY and would just make more complications. Also, the descriptions, while good, can be improved. For example; [Ancient Wolf : The first wolf that existed. Stronger than normal wolves but have less control] can be changed to something like [Primordial Wolf: The wolf that has existed from the beginning. They are have powerful abilities and are almost unmatched in their era. However, they tend to have less control over their formidable powers.] See? Don't make it too blunt unless you plan to write a lot of infodumps. I do appreciate the fact that the author filled in the background for new readers who are not familiar with RWBY. It wasn't much effort but rarely do I see authors who actually bothered to do it.
I enjoy the story. I find it much more in depth and accurate compared to other fan fictions that crossover RWBY and Dragon Ball. Though, not all of it is fully accurate regarding the power levels between RWBY and Dragon Ball but with how the story made its foundation made up the difference. All in all I find this fan fiction High Quality and a good read.
This author took way too much inspiration (read copy pasta) from the fanfiction "RWBY: Twins of the rose". 0 originality until now except the prologue...
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