dead women and other stories

another great story that's officially dead... reread it 12 times by now, as well as your other stories, and still sad that they're all dead at this point....

We want stories that empower women. We know we are powerful but we want stories of women who struggle to get to the end. Who needs this crappy thing about a woman so desperate for live that she endures rape and all other forms of abuse? What does this tell young girls all over the world? Men are strong and women are strong too. Both genders can stand up together and shine together, helping each other to achieve their goals. These are the kind of stories that will change the next generation.

Author, MC's mom and dad are dead. Chloe and Emily's mom is dead. Conrad's daughter and son-in-law are dead. I feel like you are boxing yourself into having to make characters dead in order to progress the story and build character. It's still early in the story, so it's barely noticeable now. But as you develop as an author, it's important to find other ways to advance the plot aside from dead characters and sob stories. Other than that, story is good so far, keep it up.

This is absolutely horrible. It's weird how the second author’s try to include women in their novel, they become brain dead and write like monkeys. There was absolutely no justification for how things progressed with Camilla on the mc's part other than him other than him being an idiot and possessing fake pride. DO NOT READ THIS!!!!!!!! this was a great concept but the Author failed to deliver.

Women nees to support women. a strong woman can inspire other women to achieve what they want in life. You shouldn't be jealous about the person's success then end up creating untrue stories about them l. It's about time we learn to be better and how we can move forward with women support women. I'm proud of the Madam Su she saw something great in Tangning and wants to help