mohawk novel

This book ist really good. It’ s easy to read. It’s nicely written. The MC is unique in comparison to other fanfics. The book doesnt go along the plot(yet) and MC doesn’t act according to stereotypes like a pirate with his crew and marines with their numbers. It’ kind of a Mohawk vibe. So all in all I von just recommend this book.

I know this fanfic wouldn't be good right from the first chapter, and here’s why: it quickly became clear that the author hadn’t put much real thought into the story. The world the MC reincarnates into is decided by a wheel, which actually makes sense. But when it comes to the MC’s “perks,” instead of having them chosen the same way, he’s simply granted five unlimited wishes. That alone wouldn’t be a problem if the choices were interesting or logical — but the MC ends up with powers that feel silly and underwhelming. For example, a potion to transform into a Direwolf, or “Dracula Mohawk swordsmanship” (explicitly without Haki, no less). Any reasonable person in that situation would pick overpowered or practical abilities, not gimmicks that don’t make sense for survival. It would have been much better if the five wishes were instead converted into random perks — at least then it would feel coherent. I gave the story a few more chapters to see if it improved, but it only reinforced my first impression. The MC constantly does things that might look “interesting for the story,” but his actions lack believable motivation. He helps others and makes big moves, but never with a reason that feels natural.

...I didn't mind when you wished for a wife kinda ruined the scene but whatever. But you just came out of nowhere with that BS I want to be a ranged fighter even though all my specs were for CQC. I was so close to dropping the story at that point but then I decided to give you another chance first like 2 paragraphs in chapter 5 then I'm like 'nope'. What kind of parent would let their kid get a dumbass Mohawk? I would smack my kid upside the head if they asked for something like that they would at least need to be 16 to experiment to see what they like not no 6. Also the kids way to smart for a 1 year old you should have at least waited until he was 3-4 to let him gain control of the body and made the body before that seem like a really bright child so the MC could come in and not seem like a freak of nature. If I was his parent I would be worried about him even if it seems like a good thing that he's really smart and get him checked on by my fellow clan head Yamanaka and go see a doctor. I mean come on this is not a 2d world ( of course I know it is a 2d world but not when the MC comes from the regular world that's when they turn real and not the fakes were everything goes as you would expect from 2d characters) were everything works out and some average dude can just lie to professional Ninja.

It's Peak. Nothing else has to be said. To all the suckers who are yapping about "Oh, it's Marine fic, he's just a dog to Celestial Dragons", kindly read the fic. Of course he can't challenge the entire WG like in 20 chapters. spoilers: MC(Sakazuki) is already making strides at this point in the story. He replaced most of the Marines in the Blues with his men(he rescued and trained soldiers). Also, story has deaths. If you're a fan of Rayleigh, Shakky, Boa, Mohawk, Doflamingo, Whitebeard and more. I'm sorry, but you have to though it out. Also, he makes the warlords his dogs, Akainu is Strong. And coupled with subordinates like Enel and Bullet(who are already at the Admiral level strength), this is just peak power. This is purely a Marine fic, and it acts like it. There's no colluding with pirates, only keeping them like dogs(Warlords) or Crushing them under the heel. And this MC is brutal af. My only gripe is that The updates are a bit slow, but that's just me who really wants to read the story. And So far NO Romance what so ever, and I have no problem with it.

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