scary space story

NIce brother and sister relationship! Cute but scary pet! Interesting new world with a mix of space and ancient time. Fun, tight story development!👍👍🎉🎉🥰🥰

Sounds good, but lots could be improved, like formatting, grammatical error, and other stuffs. Fixing these would improve the story quality, the formatting like double space and stuff would also be great for eyes comfortable cause this look scary to read

Nice... Original... I like it! But I hope to see more activities in space. It looks like author uses starships only as a way to change locations, like some kind of portals. But you can play with this part of the story much better. You know, space is dangerous thing by itself (radiation, depressurization, scary dark narrow corridors, when there are problems with power systems). You don't need to make space battles between ships, but you can put your heroes into situation, when they need to fight outside the ship, or storm space base. Situations, when environment is not a simple obstacle, but your second enemy, are the most exciting.

Crazy cool story,a lot of scary story great action and plenty of scary things that go bump in the night.thank for a wonderful story 👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍🛸👍

There is fiction in the space between The lines on your page of memories Write it down but it doesn't mean You're not just telling stories There is fiction in the space between You and reality You will do and say anything To make your everyday life seem less mundane There is fiction in the space between You and me There's a science fiction in the space between You and me A fabrication of a grand scheme Where I am the scary monster I eat the city and as I leave the scene In my spaceship I am laughing In your remembrance of your bad dream There's no one but you standing Leave the pity and the blame For the ones who do not speak You write the