torian cadera female jedi knight fanfic

Really good fanfic 👑👑 not many Jedi centric ones 👍

The concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one. But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one. Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really? This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.

Spoilers There is way too much information in this fanfic that you sometimes forget it's a fanfic and the haram is way too unrealistic Like there's not enough interactions between the characters before they start to get physical And the mc is basically the force incarnat but he doesn't show any of his powers to his enemies or the jedi's so they should understand that being his enemy isn't worth the risk of dying I stopped reading after the whole jedi tried to kill him and stuff

Can you make the female lead death of the endless you know because he is the dead knight??????..........................................................................................................................