"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
De he/she just say God Of War?! With a Super?! So basically you're telling me that its Super Kratos?! Kratos 2.0?! More overpowered Kratos?! My real question is: Is BOY included?!
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I think this fanfic is little bit different from the general webnovel fanfics. The relationship between the MC and the other charachters are actually good and well written except from Freya. We know Freya is cracked in the head but the history between Freya and alchemy could be revealed a bit more without losing the mystery element, that way we readers can understand Freya's actions. Grammar is decent although there are some missing words, it is passable. This fanfic actually used mystery element quite well and it makes readers curious about the history of this world (I know this is Danmachi fanfiction but the world is altered a bit).
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Well, I giving this review cuz I love one man punch and op character. And fan of danmachi fanfiction, special talking danmachi fanfiction that has freya in love interest.