harry chooses hermione over cho fanfiction

a great harry potter can fiction, the necromancer is properly fleshed out and there is no evil Dumbledore or Daphne greengrass, the female lead even if there is one might be cho chang or Hermione as these are the only 2 girls he interacts with on a regular basis

There is a mess in the order of the first few chapters, undergoing rewrite maybe, but it's not a problem later on. The problem is that this needs a #Harem tag. Dolly is chasing Hermione, Cho Chang, Luna and most likely Fleur, with Hermione and Cho already lusting after her on Second Year.

Maybe it's just me, but the author seems to really be trying to push a harry + hermione fanfiction. they're only 11, no need to rush bits like that in yet.

Another twin fanfiction hope that in this one the mc doesn´t become as dump as harry in the books. i mean he schould be scaringly smart and chooses arethmancy and runes

Honestly, I think it's a great Harry Potter fanfic where you really get the sense that Harry is a kid with more information than he can handle (this is shown through his naive thinking and lack of planning). Aside from a few inconsistencies, like him not being found after being missing for a week while Dobby is constantly casting spells, and the fact that Sirius Black isn't mentioned, I haven't found any major errors. I'm really looking forward to seeing what he thinks of Hermione now, since many fans theorize that she's been in love with Harry for years and only started giving up when she wasn't invited to the Yule Ball and when Harry was still in love with Cho instead of noticing her. Also, Ginny managed to win Harry over before Hermione could even try to be with him, in addition to the new feelings she was developing for Ron. There are also the thousands of stories in fanfics where Ron is unfaithful or where Hermione and Ron's marriage becomes suffocating due to their differences and constant arguments.