"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
I read many fic with forced plot, and this fic is definitely one of them -Tony said Friday is monitoring Bucky 24/7, and yet the useless AI still lost sight of Bucky and don't know how it happen -Ross is aiming at Tony, and yet when the whole building is drugged, they left Tony alone instead of kidnapping him -An AI of Tony Stark, got put down by a Virus of all thing -And said AI missed any suspicious movement and got Tony shot, but also the explosion still happen -It's funny how Friday fail to notice an unknown radiowave right in the office of Tony Stark, the author make a reasoning of because it's already there before Tony put Friday in. That is not how it work, it doesn't matter when Tony put Friday in, but that thing should have noticed right away that there is an unknown radiowave transmitting signal somewhere especially when it was right near one of it's server