After successfully reincarnating into the cultivation world, I won lying down
The new books,"I'm Wild After Dressing As A Big Boss 'Contracted Beast" and "After Rebirth, I've Became A Foppish Young Master's Favorite Pet"
After White Dream's death, she had finally been reincarnated successfully. However, in order to be able to be successfully reincarnated, she had really worried her heart out. Not only was she afraid that she would accidentally miscarry, but she was also worried that her heartless father would forcefully miscarry her. Bai Meng shrugged helplessly."It's really too difficult for me."
Only after successfully being born did he realize that he seemed to have been thrown into the cultivation world? But she didn't want to cultivate.
She just wanted to be a salted fish and live a life of being fed by her parents, master, and senior brother every day!
Master: Even if my disciple is a good-for-nothing, I will protect her for life!
Senior Brother: Eh, Junior Sister is trash? Are you serious?
At this moment, White Dream was being "grounded" by someone with a look of despair on her face. She even said harshly,"You're not allowed to come out until you break through!"
Bai Meng looked at the person who had "confined" her and her face twitched.
Don't think that I don't recognize you just because you're wearing a mask!
A certain someone's eyes flashed with ridicule as he said,"Is there anything faster than dual cultivation?"
Bai Meng held her sore waist and glared at him angrily!
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First off i would like to point out that english is not my native language so forgive me if i spell or write something wrong. Having said that, i have not seen any grammar or spelling mistake so far in the ff, the mc is kinda ok but ultimately very bland due to the fact that we know nothing about him other than him being a reincarnator. He was never really described and the only thing we know about his personality is what we can infer from his actions. Another thing that really bothers me (and really my main problem with this fanfic) is that it is just a recapitulation of the movie, nothing changes except for hiccups gender, the mc doesnt interact with anyone other than hiccup, nobody seems to ever talk about or to him and he just kind of tags along to whatever hiccup does, i would also like to point out that some interactions that he has with hiccup are straight out just things hiccup did with astrid in the movie (ex: the part where they ride together for the first time). Sorry for the long rant but i was kinda dissapointed that the first fanfic i found of httyd ended up being just a rewrite of the original.