anakin and ahsoka fanfiction

Star Wars Fixing Mistakes

Brezer

2026-01-07

loving the story. I am guessing this is a Russian translation like your other. I like how hes using armor and he actually looking for tactics. Will he get the chips removed from his clones? this is a great story so far is hope you continue.

Star Wars: The Ends Justify the Means

Granulan · Anime & Comics

94 Chs

FSH

2021-12-12

This story has a lot of potential. IT’s hard finding good Anakin centered stories in fanfiction and Webnovel. I look forward to when the story starts opening up.

Star Wars: Skywalker

Link_Id · Movies

274 Chs

GOULA

2025-07-03

This fanfic is not just a failure — it’s an open insult to everything Anakin Skywalker stands for. The author has clearly missed the entire emotional core of Star Wars and instead turned a complex, tragic character into a shallow, power-hungry warlord whose heart can be swayed by the first alien woman who offers him a throne. You have the audacity to show Anakin’s perfect dream — his mother alive, Padmé and the children safe, Obi-Wan at peace, Ahsoka still a Jedi — and then you make him throw that all away in the same chapter just because some DC war empress says, “Let’s rule the galaxy together.” That’s not a twist — that’s character assassination. Padmé’s love, Anakin’s fall, the weight of his pain — all of that is tossed aside like garbage. You didn’t write Darth Vader. You wrote an edgy OC in a helmet. The writing is shallow, the emotional beats are nonexistent, and the tone is closer to fan service than storytelling. Even Maxima is reduced to a plot device — a cheap “Padmé replacement” with none of the depth, only used to prop up Vader as a romantic fantasy. This isn’t dark. This isn’t tragic. It’s a parody of power fantasies wrapped in stolen Star Wars skin. If George Lucas read this, he’d either laugh or cry — and neither would be good for you. Fix your story. Or at least, admit it has nothing to do with Anakin Skywalker anymore.

Dark Lord: Bride of Vader

Pistol_Pete_76 · Movies

17 Chs

Brezer

2026-05-30

original start and I hope she lives. always blamed anakin for her death. all he had to do to save her was have padme get her and let her live on naboo. but he just forgets her and the flips out when she dies. leaves her as a slave and never comes back but always gets pissed about slavery. i also w8ndered how his suit has environmentalcontrols to cool him so why can he feal wind blowing through it... suit should keep him warm since it kept him cool....I rambled sorry. so grammar is good so far. story is strong with no cliche so far... has lots of potential. i dont usually 5 star since most peeps just ignore 5 star post and look at lower for a reasonable description but just had to toss it out this time. i have been missing a good SI. since he is in his swtor character (I think) would be good if he gets memories about abilities and bases or rescource cache locations for goodies of old republic era gear.

Star Wars: The Inquisitor.

zombie_man1233 · Video Games

8 Chs

She pampered the villain after the book

Everyone in Guangyue City knew that the eldest daughter of the Yun family, Yun Ran, had a bodyguard who accompanied her since she was young. She could not be chased away, and she was also ridiculed by others because of this. She had once shouted at him angrily,"Can you not follow me?!" So annoying!" He did not react. However, not long after, Missy became the bodyguard's follower. "Ember, if you don't let me follow you, I won't like you anymore," she joked. The girl's smile was bright and cunning, like a little fox. The next second, she was pressed into his arms and kissed. The man's back was slightly bent. His posture was humble and pious, and his eyes were filled with aggression and possessiveness. His voice was hoarse and low. "Ranran, don't joke with me like this." He could tolerate her never looking back. But he couldn't stand her leaving his sight. - The world is turbid, day and night are the same sin, sin and love are the same song. He had lived half his life in darkness, drowning in hatred, and she was his only light. [Cool, rich, beautiful, and arrogant sister X, two-faced, tolerant, and paranoid bodyguard, two strong and two clean, sweet pets 1v1, mutual redemption]

The Rich Star

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The image of the Imperial Concubine as a salted fish has collapsed again.

Yu Tian had transmigrated into the book and became the demon concubine who had caused disaster in the book. In order to avoid a tragic death, Yu Yao decided to wear a small vest to develop wretchedly, just to be a qualified salted fish and avoid the sharpness of the male and female leads. An imperial edict descended from the sky, and Yu Yao became the new imperial consort. What palace fight? What fight for favor? Sorry, bengong only wants to be a qualified salted fish, to endure the emperor to death, and to be the imperial concubine. It was rumored that the Emperor of the Beijin Kingdom was as handsome as a god, and he was bloodthirsty. He also suffered from some unspeakable illness. Therefore, he had been in power for many years and had few children. He only had one crown prince. Yu Yao had originally thought that she and the dog Emperor were not fated to be together in this lifetime. However, she did not expect that after entering the palace, the dog Emperor would flip her card every few days. "Emperor, your body is not good. You should rest early." One night, Yu Yao was forced to the foot of the bed. "My beloved consort will know after tonight whether my body is alright or not." After a night, the emperor ate the marrow and refused to stop. Yu Tian, who was originally determined to be a salted fish to the end, had accidentally become the Emperor's favorite. He had also accidentally exposed all kinds of small identities that blinded everyone's eyes. He had also accidentally raised the Crown Prince who would unify the world in the future and directly walked to the peak of his life.

Concubine Liang

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Mrs. Fu is a ruthless person

[Su Liao's sweet pet, 1v1, double virgin, strong man, strong woman, vest, big boss] Everyone said that Tangxi was a monster because she was different in the day and at night. Someone saw her wandering on the streets in the middle of the night like a lonely ghost! Only Fu Lishen said that Tang Xi was very beautiful at night. Her bloodthirsty eyes were very beautiful. She was like a child curled up in a corner, eating a lollipop and counting the stars. She was very beautiful when she held a knife and gritted her teeth, especially when…she was the most beautiful when she called him Brother Shen… Before meeting Fu Lishen, Tang Xi never thought that she would climb out of the mud one day. After meeting Fu Lishen, Tang Xi felt that Fu Lishen was her light and her salvation. She would put down the knife when she heard his name. She never bought lollipops herself again because Fu Lishen would buy lollipops that tasted better than hers. She would sleep defenseless in his arms until dawn… "Candy Baby," he said,"we're both people who struggled out of hell on earth. We have to be warm to each other for the rest of our lives." "Is a lifetime enough?" she asked with a smile. "Not enough. I have to live forever." - The beautiful and valiant female president of a fashion group who doesn't say much vs. the big shot of a consortium who is on the verge of breaking down people every day (This book is also known as Mr. Fu, You Were the One Who Was Touched First.)

Senior Sister Miejue

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Half-returning Song

The unruly and willful eldest daughter of the Xie family, Xie Ning, thought at first glance that Xiao Jingyu was really a peerless talent. At second glance, she thought that he was like a sesame seed looking at a mung bean, a turtle looking at a turtle, and fire and water were incompatible… Ever since Xie Ning saved a pretty boy, she thought that he was a cute little puppy that could be subdued. However, who knew that this pretty boy was more cunning than anyone else? From then on, Xie Ning's heart had gone elsewhere… ---- "How are you going to thank me?" "Give yourself to me?" ---- This article has no logic, the story is purely fictional, Mu Zi nine skirts: 773914191

Jiuzimu

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From the stone age onwards, we ruled the world

In front of them were tall mammoths, and behind them were ferocious saber-toothed tigers. When a famous biologist traveled to the Stone Age, where wild beasts ran amok and humans could only huddle in caves, there was a hint of sadness in addition to excitement... Fortunately, he had a good memory. With his photographic memory, he began to climb the technological tree from the Stone Age and led mankind to dominate the world!

Half a cup of tea

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