adverbs in novels

Hayle Coven Novels

I’m an international, multiple award-winning author with a passion for the voices in my head. As a singer, songwriter, independent filmmaker and improv teacher and performer, my life has always been about creating and sharing what I create with others. Now that my dream to write for a living is a reality, with over a hundred titles in happy publication and no end in sight, I live in beautiful Prince Edward Island, Canada, with my giant cats, pug overlord and overlady and my Gypsy Vanner gelding, Fynn. ***WORLD'S BEST STORY2014*** Her mom's a witch. Her dad's a demon. And she just wants to be ordinary. I batted at the curl of smoke drifting off the tip of my candle and tried not to sneeze. My heavy velvet cloak fell in oppressive, suffocating folds in the closed space of the ceremony chamber, the cowl trapping the annoying bits of puff I missed. I hated the way my eyes burned and teared, an almost constant distraction. Not that I didn't welcome the distraction, to be honest. Anything to take my mind from what went on around me. Being part of a demon raising is way less exciting than it sounds. Sydlynn Hayle's teen life couldn't be more complicated. Trying to please her coven is all a fantasy while the adventure of starting over in a new town and fending off a bully cheerleader who hates her are just the beginning of her troubles. What to do when delicious football hero Brad Peters--boyfriend of her cheer nemesis--shows interest? If only the darkly yummy witch, Quaid Moromond, didn't make it so difficult for her to focus on fitting in with the normal kids despite her paranormal, witchcraft laced home life. Add to that her crazy grandmother's constant escapes driving her family to the brink and Syd's between a rock and a coven site. Forced to take on power she doesn't want to protect a coven who blames her for everything, only she can save her family's magic. If her family's distrust doesn't destroy her first.

Patti Larsen · Urban

The Dark Novels

In a world where the chosen one has defeated the demon lord and brought peace to the realm, now 500 years have passed since the demon's defeat. Aetheria, the world, appears peaceful, but is it truly so?

Q_Tip · Fantasy

Writing Web Novels In America

Reborn in the United States in 1995, with all the web novels he has read in his head. Let's see how he uses online literature to skew America's bestseller rankings and become a popular cultural master like Stan Lee. In the 20th century, what is the largest IP in Hollywood? It's comics and web novels! Netflix? It's nothing without online literature! Disney's CEO later claims.

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Megan_Immanuella

2022-12-07

The writing quality is insanely good and the action perfectly portrayed with great word and linking adverbs.The plot is generally great and in all the storyline is Like wow!Keep up the goodwork!

Chaos Path

Loose_Pen · Fantasy

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kuhaku_sora

2021-07-15

Very interesting story (fanfiction)! I haven't watch the anime or read the lightnovel of damnachi. But this novel explains a lot (I dunno. for me it has an original plot that I could follow). The only points i'd like to suggest are the passive voice misuse and adverbs (such as "who had been completely silent" and other lines in the chapters) adverbs are great, but sometimes an active verb does the job well! the same goes with the passive voice misuse! Kudos for the author~

Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia

Supersam362 · Anime & Comics

3 Chs

_B_A_R_

2023-02-02

The book is good, I love the story. however sometimes reading it can be a bit difficult, I'm not sure if the problem is with the writer or the translator.. extreme overuse of adverbs to an 'incomparable' degree...

Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime

Blue Soft Dough · Fantasy

708 Chs

f1n

2020-07-17

Not my cup of tea in certain areas. The main one being the overuse of adverbs by putting them into every spot one could fit them. Of course, this is just my opinion, others might like 🤷‍♂️. The book cover confuses me to a point somewhere up maybe down there. Otherwise? Sure, nothing wrong in a slow-going novel. Fast-paced novels are the majority so it's fun to read something chill sometimes.

City treasure hunters

Gourmet_DAO · Urban

12 Chs

november121954

2018-02-25

I really like the story though sometimes am a little confused because of some slightly grammatical errors like the right usage of adverbs...but all in all i like how the story goes...keep it up...☺

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But I love you

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