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I wrote A review not too Long A go, the formatting problem went away after a few chapters, make-ing (QI somehow censor The word if It written correctly) It more bearable,

Good story just needs to work on grammar. The character is well balanced but they need to work on using correct words. And formatting because one forth of the word cound could end up being the system.

After reading the first two chapters, I can’t really comment on the story’s progression or later quality yet. However, the sentence structure and word choice feel a bit strange, almost as if the text was translated. The formatting also feels very unusual. Instead of standard quotation marks for dialogue, the author uses square brackets, and the dialogue is written in bold. That style might work for system messages, but not for regular spoken dialogue. Because of this formatting choice, I don’t think I will continue reading. The story itself seems simple and clichéd, but possibly still readable. The dialogue formatting, however, is too distracting and genuinely uncomfortable to read.

It is a good novel! There are some Grammatical and punctuation errors along with formatting, but the overall story is good. Keep up the excellent work.

Outstanding story, one of the best plots in the WebNovel fantasy genre. Author needs to fix the formatting of his uploads, with many chapters containing sections that are unreadable on the WebNovel platform. Also, production rate very slow. If author fixes the formatting and can actually produce 4-8 chapters a week, the popularity of this novel could skyrocket.