explaining tone of story in fiction

Dear New Life, Please Tone Down My Presence for a Bit!!

A supportive brother gets to live a new life as one of the main characters in a Boy Love Game as “Gilbert Bedivere,” the son of a duke, who was his family’s pride. His goal for this life is that he will have a slow living lifestyle, staying far away from problems. But who would have known that getting too close to the main characters, who are his friends and his younger brother, will lead him away from the goal he has set! Who are those main characters surrounding him…? Hareve Lancelot… a white haired boy with rainbow eyes who makes all the girls go crazy, as expected of the owner of the famous SM route and the user of the light magic. Even though he looks cold on the outside, who would have known he is super hot-tempered! Nigel Gawain… an adorable-looking boy with silver eyes, an owner of the 3P route, but who would have known that he is just a fluffy boy! Cass Bedivere… the protagonist of the game, with his golden eyes and hair, he appears in the immoral love route. Even though he is born with dark magic, who would have known that he has also interesting relationships with other characters. Not to mention many other characters that Gilbert has never met, He now feels the problems lining up for him!

Linea-Lucifer

Death Tone: Revenge of the strongest race

Constantly entangled in a never-ending cycle of reincarnation, Finn Adrian is determined to make it in a world that has been forged to go against his progress. Finn believes no one can be trusted. Dying a thousand times has impacted him strongly. A strong, cold-hearted, hateful at the same time calculated villain he turns out to be. Now blessed by the gods with a system that at first turns out to be a nightmare, *[You will now be reminded of your roots. Memories will be played while the host is asleep] “What?! Memories?" Finn stutters as the only memories he had and knew about were of him dying not once, not twice but a thousand times!!...* Eventually, things begin to look up for him. The system would become the only one he shared a connection with that didn't involve his dubious plans. *[Blood/Flesh ratio equilibrium has shifted beyond marked point] [Blood/Flesh > 70:30] [Consume flesh to maintain equilibrium!!] Now with the various powers that come with the system, Finn is determined to change his Fate by any means necessary. But along the way, he will meet obstacles that would pose an existential threat to him. What happens when the prey becomes the hunter? Because his main target isn't a target at all. His target is all!!! Check out my other work if it turns out you like this one. MY DEMON SYSTEM: IMMORTAL WARS A/N:- .The chapters are being updated continuously. I would appreciate your input so I could better the novel. ........... Note:- For mass release and bonus chapters:- 15 Golden Tickets= 1 bonus chapter. 150 power stones= 1 bonus chapter. 1 Magic Castle= 3 bonus chapters. Other than that, any gifts to the novel will have bonus releases to them. ... February (Valentines) Event:- Events are going on!!! So join the dicord and help the novel as much as possible with your contributions to earn the rewards I have set up for you all. The top 3 fans would be rewarded with coins while there will also be specially commissioned chapters and some spicy bonus chapters for all of you. More info on discord, so don't forget to join the discord community. Also, don't forget to vote for the novel with power stones and Golden tickets as this would increase your chances of winning by a lot. Have fun ;) Discord Channel Link:- https://discord.gg/yA7EV7cT Art cover : DC max

Dark_knight234 · Fantasy

A twist on "Lilith" with a mythical tone

In a world divided between light and shadow, Lily was never meant to rule. A kind-hearted girl with dreams of freedom, she was thrust into darkness by the one person she trusted most—her brother, Azeriel. Azeriel had only one ambition: to ascend as the King of Heaven. But for him to claim the divine throne, balance had to be maintained. The throne of Hell could not remain empty. And so, in a move both cunning and cold, he sacrificed his own sister to the depths below, binding her fate to the underworld. At first, Lily resisted. She fought the fire, the demons, the chaos. But Hell does not bend for the weak. And Lily… Lily did not break. She transformed. Forging power from pain and fire from fury, Lily shed her past and took on a new name—Lilith, Queen of Hell. No longer a pawn in her brother’s game, she now commands legions and whispers rebellion through the flames. But Lilith has not forgotten. Her green eyes burn with vengeance. Heaven may be bathed in light, but she will bring the storm. And when brother and sister finally face each other again, only one throne will remain.

harshit_1886 · Fantasy

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