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Author: Bad_Wolf_7811
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An amazing world of cultivation. A majestic world where miracles happen. There is a warrior who defies destiny and forge his own path facing innumerable difficulties ahead. Come and join the life of the person who will go against the set destiny of the cruel world and become something extraordinary. ===== Extraordinary my foot. What is this illogical cr*p? Does it even make sense? If you are doctor, then work in a hospital. What the hell are you doing going after girls? If you are a commander in the army, then bring your army to get revenge on those who wronged you. Why go through the trouble of pretending to be a weakling. You are a useless son in law? Your wife's family thinks you are good for nothing? Then how the hell did you score her in the first place?!!! If they like money so much and you are a hidden millionaire, then why in the name of sanity would you hide this fact and be berated every day?!!! The hell is all this?!!! The more I read it, the more illogical it becomes. Like this all came straight out of someone's as-- [Host, why don't you calm down?] 'You shut up!!! You're the reason I'm stuck here in the first place!!!!' [Host, you need anger management] 'THE FU*K DID YOU SAY?!!!!!' ===== Hello everyone! This is my second novel and so far, nothing is decided. This is just an idea that has been plaguing my mind for quite a long time and I decided to let it out and let you guys decide whether or not I should work on it. Give it a proper read and let me know. You guys will decide the fate of this novel. Also, I would like you guys to come up with proper genres for this story. Bonus chapters: 150 PS for one chapter 300 PS for another chapter 20 GT for two chapters 50 GT for another two chapters 1 Review of 4 stars or above, 1 extra chapters Maximum extra chapters per week: 7 ===== The cover is A.I generated and is not mine. If the real owner would like me to remove it, let me know in any chapter comments. That's it. Enjoy! ~~ Character art: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1B7sHito4UOZqPIK5pPyIFTzgqiaT_ZlU?usp=sharing

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yiyuehua
2021-03-31

Here to review!! The writing style is crisp and very descriptive. A nuance that I have is that sometimes the use of metaphors can be a bit jarring, especially when it is overly verbose. While some scenes work very well if described so fluidly, I find myself lost in paragraphs upon paragraphs of heavy text and long sentence structures. You also tend to use passive voice over active voice a lot, which *can* deter from the scene since it sounds rather detached. An example of this would be during the smut scene with a bit too many conjunctions and adverbs. As poetic as the words are, some word choices can be a little off-putting (such as 'gyrating', 'ricochet'). Sometimes it can also come off as a little too much. Examples: 'swift as a riverside eel' = when in a sexy moment, it kind of made me chuckle! 'heavenly stars to dance behind closed eyelids' = poetic but too much? 'eyelashes would flutter open to gaze across the patch of space and bask in the tranquility' I would really, really love to read more dialogue between them (during the smut scene AND when they first got acquainted). Their personalities aren't too defined in the beginning chapters and their relationship took a very abrupt turn (which can be good if they're only into each other because of their looks). You described the two characters feeling a sort of affinity to each other solely because of the prophecy, but I didn't see much chemistry between them. This aside, it was a solid read! I really would love to see more of Jaelan and Wylen's dynamic~ Thank you for posting this!!

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What is a ricochet novel?
2 answers
2024-11-27 06:48
A ricochet novel is a type of novel that often has a plot which bounces or 'ricochets' between different characters, storylines, or time periods. It can be quite complex as the narrative threads keep intersecting and diverging in unexpected ways.
How to write a ricochet novel?
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2024-11-27 18:12
When writing a ricochet novel, it's important to plan out the different arcs of your story. Decide which characters will be central and which will be more on the periphery. Begin with one storyline and then, at key moments, shift to another. You can use devices like flashbacks or sudden changes in perspective. For instance, you could start with a character in a modern - day city and then ricochet to a different character in a historical setting. Keep the reader guessing until the end when all the pieces come together.
Who is the author of 'Ricochet a novel'?
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2024-10-28 11:52
I don't know who the author of 'Ricochet a novel' is. You can try looking it up in a library database or a book search engine.
What is 'Ricochet a novel' about?
2 answers
2024-10-27 05:42
I'm not sure specifically as I haven't read it. But generally, a novel could be about various things like relationships, a character's journey, or a particular event.
What was ricochet? There was a novel where a pig's trotter killed the enemy with a ricochet. Was that possible?
1 answer
2024-09-12 11:44
A ricochet bullet was a type of ammunition that could bounce up in the air and fall quickly in some military and combat scenarios. This kind of weapon ammunition could jump over the surface of the enemy's position or obstacles and land far away from the target after being fired. A ricochet bullet was usually used when shooting with high accuracy or when it was necessary to avoid direct contact with an enemy target. The ricochet bomb was widely used throughout history, especially during the First and Second World Wars. However, ricochet bullets required high-energy ammunition to manufacture and store, and they required specialized training and skills to use. Therefore, their use in modern warfare had gradually decreased. Back in your problematic novel, it's unlikely that the pig trotters killed the enemy with a ricochet. The ricochet was a weapon that required professional skills and training to use. The ricochet required precise control of the trajectory to ensure that the impact point was near the target. At the same time, the energy and flight speed of the ammunition needed to be taken into account to ensure that the ricochet could complete the process of bouncing up and falling in the air and finally hit the target. In the novel, if the pig's foot could master the skill of ricochet and accurately control the trajectory, he could use ricochet to kill the enemy. However, in reality, ricochet was a weapon that required specialized training and skills to use. The risk of using ricochet was very high, and it was not recommended for ordinary people to try it.
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