naruto is tsunade's and jiraiya's son fanfiction

i have read in mtl, the darkening system is trash even until the very end when naruto reached the 100% darkening he's still soft and naive, tsunade ordered jiraiya to kill naruto and he killed naruto and the mc reincarnate naruto and fake his death so naruto can reach 100% darkening and then he attacked konoha along with the akatsuki and yet naruto cant kill jiraiya and tsunade because of drama reason

Amazing story one of the best Naruto fics I've read. The characters are great Jiraiya and Tsunade especially stand out to me and it's probably the first time I dont' hate Hiruzen.

I have read 44 chapters and this fic is a complete disappointment. stupid plot, stupid jokes for kindergarten. idiotic relationships with other people, from the very beginning you imposed Tsunade on us like a child, then idiotically got rid of her, and now you've given it to Jiraiya altogether, I swear I hate you. one of the dumbest and trash fanfiction about Naruto!

Am I reading a Naruto fanfiction or a real world politics fanfiction? Moreover, I can guarantee to you that tsunade and jiraiya would never support hiruzen if they knew all the sh*t he pulled behind the scenes. They would stand aside and watch. There's just too much politics in this fanfiction, it doesn't feel like I'm reading a Naruto fanfic but rather a political thriller with no supernatural powers. The Mc is kind of a joke in this fanfic. He had a pay to win system and instead of going around secretly robbing nobles to become op he uses his salary and blackmail other poor a*s ninja. It just doesn't make any sense. Using the sharingan, mc could easily rob enemy nobles, he just doesn't.... Instead he plays kid games with the hokage.

As always the translator has done an excellent job and the the translation is without any mistakes. The story itself however is so bad I'm honestly doubting if the author has even watched the anime. The MC just got transmigrated he is already as if he is the original Jiraiya(not to fool people, but literally as if he is Jiraiya), the MC have no self pride and lets Tsunade walk all over him, the MC's obsession with pursuing Tsunade is too illogical, Danzo is acting way too weird (Danzo actually joke with one of his Root Shinobi about his wife being a w****, and he always address Hiruzen as Hokage-sama, like what the fuck?), Danzo's Root Shinobi are cursing Danzo in their thoughts, original Jiraiya is described as dead last and completely untalented, the timeline is completely wrong (in this story during the Second Shinobi World War Jiraiya and Tsunade and Orochimaru are only Chunin while in the anime they are elite Jonin who could fight Hanzo), Tsunade actually invites both Orochimaru and Jiraiya to restaurants multiple times and pay from her own money (yes, the same Tsunade who is always gambling all her money away), Tsunade needs Jiraiya's help in learning Ninjutaus and in Chakra Control, etc etc. Also, Tsunade here is portrayed as an asshole and she is so annoying I really don't understand how the author thought someone would enjoy reading about such a character. It's also very annoying that despite her being such a b****, the MC is still constantly licking her boots and pursue her. Those are only a few points I took the time to write, but almost everything in this fanfic is wrong. I really tried to read more chapters and not jump to conclusions, but at chapter 40 I gave up.