"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
Great! I love this story so far, and I would love to see it updated! A tip is that after say, Bill speaks, and Dipper will afterward, make a new paragraph. An example would be: "I love you," Bill said to Dipper. "I love you too..." Dipper replied softly. But anyway, great story!