read naruto shikamaru's story
Three Souls lay in one body, One soul belonging to a man who had reached the peak, the strongest there ever was, the one who had the talent to do so. Yet he suffered because of his talent. His soul shone as bright as a galaxy once, but now is but a sun. His talents made him the envy of all. And He lost it all, tricked and manipulated from the time he was a child. The Second soul belonged to a man soon to be the richest in the world in his own universe. A man who had his face charred, a man who seemingly had every odd placed against him from the very beginning. He went against the family that abused him and triumphed over them. Yet he was left broken inside, He craved a release, and the first soul brought him that release. And he became a psychopath that scared the manifestation of evil itself. And the Third? The child born from their souls was anything but ordinary. Cursed with a fate no one wanted. Cursed with the fact that the Universe wanted him dead. He was born from Chaos And Ice and a fraction of light, yet he manipulated space. His abilities were so powerful they were harmful to his body. His talent is as infinite as the boundless cosmos. His enemies were greater than one could count. His luck is worse than shit. And yet, he continued to fight. Despite whatever was thrown at him, he would brute force through it or outsmart it, befitting the other two above. He continued to fight, not believing in the bullshit that was destiny. ---------------------------------------- Discord: https://discord.gg/Sgxw6QEsgE
I like your story about naruto smurfing into the past, however, the fact that naruto told sasuke and shikamaru about he came from the future doesn't make any sense and could destroy his plan. I do not like it. you should make sasuke and shikamaru forget all about it with a memory erase jutsu or something. please, that scene really bothers me alot and naruto is suppose to keep this as a secret. I would understand if 3rd hokage sama would know instead of sasuke and shikamaru. Even if shikamaru could slowly develop a theory about what he saw on naruto, you should have let naruto keep it as a secret and naruto should have excused something else when he knock off sasuke, like "its a genjutsu". its easy that way cause its very dumb to let sasuke and shikamaru know that hes from the future. besides he can finish off the prevention of war by himself