"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
Writing quality is nice, MC is extremally naive to the point of idiocy. Pouring way too much resource to grangers and for what? It is clear from the story up to now that the idiotic mc will go full hermione all the way. The hermione which is know it all, bossy and teachers pet. She is one of the characters i hate as much as ron and dumbles. Any self respecting character will keep away from those three and will not even touch them 100 feet poll..