cassandra clare and holly black short story

Idea kind of reminds me of Cassandra Clare’s series if you’ve ever read that, anyways absolutely love it and as far as grammar and everything, it looks good.

Whatever you are physically...male or female, strong or weak, ill or healthy--all those things matter less than what your heart contains. If you have the soul of a warrior, you are a warrior. All those other things, they are the glass that contains the lamp, but you are the light inside. Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Angel (The Infernal Devices, #1)

Whatever you are physically...male or female, strong or weak, ill or healthy--all those things matter less than what your heart contains. If you have the soul of a warrior, you are a warrior. All those other things, they are the glass that contains the lamp, but you are the light inside. Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Angel (The Infernal Devices, #1)

Whatever you are physically...male or female, strong or weak, ill or healthy--all those things matter less than what your heart contains. If you have the soul of a warrior, you are a warrior. All those other things, they are the glass that contains the lamp, but you are the light inside. Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Angel (The Infernal Devices, #1)

I think is story is a litter to short. I like how your writing your likes and dislikes about Clare and Alex. I dislike how you did put in the rest of the character in this story.