natsu and lucy dragon slayer fanfiction

what's the point of the mc getting natsu's power if it's just a cheap imatation 1)he still gets the dragon slayer magic motion sickness weakness and he doesn't even have dragon slayer magic it's just his quirk is similar to natsu but pales in comparison 2) he literally just said his father had a lizard quirk and due to mutation he got a dragon or should I say lizard with wings quirk 3) everything is just shallow like it went from being in the orphanage straight to ua exam which way to fast 4) if he has a fire and lizard quirk where's his quirk for the end power that was basically keeping natsu from disappearing

auth you have cooked with this story. i dont normally write comments, but dame so far, its great suggestion. add elements we have only seen from dragons like ireen with enchanting or selenes moon dragon magic, or natsu dragon god slayer combo. mix stuff like wind, water, and lightning for storm dragon slayer. white, shadow, and lightning for dark light lightning etc

Overall this is good fanfic, character building is very good and unexpected, who's will ever thought that those dense dragon slayer will got caught in romance, good mature natsu. No lemon please I think this story is the best without lemon.

the story idea is very interesting and there are no issues with the grammar, but there are 2 things that bother me. First is the addition of essence flames, there are a lot of ways to power in fairy tail and Natsu has even more since he is a dragon slayer and END. There was no reason to add these essence flames that are similar to those in cultivation novels. The major point i dont like about this is how Natsu's personality seems to be very different. It's like somrone else merged with him and only a few habits and character traits of natsu were left over.