obito and rin lemon fanfiction

He decided to not save Obito and Rin, causing Obito to transform into a psychopath thanks to Madara and Zetsu, free the kyuubi who kill his parents. And at the firsts chapters he is like "i must "protect my parents" and that it's absoulte nosense, considering he did not save rin at least, because thanks to Rin's death Obito became nuts And it's not like he had no choice At least, give a better reason to not save Obito or Rin

This translation was alright, but man, why do you have to keep repeating the full name of someone that is already introduced once? Rin Nohara this, Rin Nohara that. Just call her Rin. I thought you already 'fixed' a lot of things, but in reality, not really. It's so jarring to read and have Rin's full name in almost every paragraph. You call Obito, Obito. Kakashi, Kakashi. But Rin has to be Rin Nohara consistently?

Fuh! Although he sounds op, the author balance his progression quite well! I love the story! Give it a try! It’s very good! Ps, uchiha rin is not obito’s rin!!

yang paling menjengkelkan, MC berusaha menyelamatkan Rin, dan zetsu masih ngotot culik rin untuk buat obito jadi penghianat yah salah MC masih betah di konoha karena alasan desa yang makmur

The story is good but there are way too many mistakes, like Obito saying, "If I had that power I could resurrect Rock Lee," when it should be Rin.