school for sympathy story

................a lot of sympathy for ethan 🥺🥺

Well written, your description of the emotions felt by Lacey are well described with plenty of expression. Though since you started with the friend group breaking apart cuz she had to leave, there wasn’t much tension or sympathy that I could feel for the characters. I would’ve preferred you add at least some sort of school day of them interacting. You make the characters feel real and not 1 dimensional. The story is well presented, a pretty good read all in all

The beginning of the story looks quite interesting! While it is difficult to judge the plot itself and its twists, but the characters regularly perform their functions: Daina (Esther) - causes sympathy and desire to help, Duke Dehsin and Ben - sympathy and interest, and Rabien and the people of the Temple - disgust. I hope to read the sequel soon! Good luck in your work~

I liked the story....but feel sympathy for female lead....still its so romantic....and iam getting more interested in the story...have little mistakes but ok

The story is full of turns and twists but the writing is that of an ameture style. The main character gains the sympathy in the beginning but as story progresses she seems invincible which is a bit if tun off.