kara supergirl oc fanfiction

did you read all the supergirl comics before making this fanfiction it's just out of curiosity because in the comics supergirl is very cheating there were plenty of times she cheated a lot and she was often stronger than clark but it is sometimes nerfed otherwise super fanfiction and there are a lot of words per chapter

So I’m up to date, the biggest problem I have with this fanfic is that the mc is Kara. Not the actual mc, I mean all he’s doing is watching, nothing else. I like the omakes but this isn’t an urahara fanfic, it a supergirl fanfic. The title is misleading.

Wish Incould rate this higher than a 3 the writing quality and upload is good but Kara's over reliance in Tech and constant fear are major problems to the enjoyment if the fic sure Kryptonian tech is cool and Kara is still recovering from the start but with how much she telies in tech this is less if a Supergirl fic and more like a Ironman fic it doesn't feel like I'm readijg about Kara Zor El just a female Ironman the PTSD and constant procrastination don't help hope that changes sooner than later because this is otherwise a great fic just has it's glaring issues

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hi author it's good fanfic please try to continue this fanfic and update more chapters thanks for such a interesting idea for fanfic most fanfic usually related to being barry twin brother and then have relationship with kara aka supergirl but I like your approach man I would appreciate if you continue to post more chapters