nitrous black rubber mask dentist stories

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there are too many unnecessary words, all the back stories are constantly shown and there is no rubber fruit gomu gomu and the character is so-so not like a conqueror

I want your dentist I recommended this book it's epic and beautiful

An old woman walked into a dentist's office, took off all her clothes, and spread her legs. The dentist said, "I think you have the wrong room." "You put in my husband's teeth last week," she replied. "Now you have to remove them."

To the Author, 1. Writing quality is to the level of undrestand but not to the good/best quality, 2. Updates- atleast 1 or 2 chapters per week, 3. Story development is good but make it little bit instense training for MC. 4. Make MC and Anti-Hero who does Justice and kill the wrong-doers, Make his outfit/Suit full black without Mask or With Mask with lots of defensive fuinjustsu on it's suit, Make MC the Master of all things - Survival Technique, Sealing, Fuinjustsu , Martial Arts( Combat , Sword, Staff and all other weapons, Chi, Ki, Chakra, Nature Energy and Yin/Yang Energy, etc.,), all Ninjutsu(also creates his unique jutsus which can be leard by any one but is very hard including his Sage Mode)All Sage Modes- Combining it into one unique Sage Mode to Make it permanent to his body only with Tattos no other like becoming otsusuki but Making him to grow with unlimited potential. Make the MC have his GF/Wife to have both Biyakugan and Sharingan together.( and No Harem please) 4. World Background - Make it Light hearted as Well as Dark sides too. Make The MC have his own group in ANBU/Normal Ninja as It named Rudra( who finish the evil by eradicating it completely to it's roots) with out mask and sometimes mask(for special missions- Simple black human mask with numbers) but ALL BLACK with lots of invisible fuinjustsu on it cloth making it very defensive. Thanks! Yours truly- Reader-Kun.