"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
Honestly, I have absolutely loved your other books, so I have no doubts that this is one with insane potential and that you can use all of its potential CORRECTLY. Although I dropped Against Heaven's Will, it was still a great book. I hope you don't drop this like you did Chameleon: My True Face. Also, a petition to please bring back Chameleon: My True Face.