"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
Female lead aurora at least showed some backbone in the beginning when she married slade Wellington in a flash marriage. But story quickly goes downhill, aurora is a complete pushover weak spineless female lead. She has no plan for revenge. Her actions are weird and contradictory (she refused to be her frenemy Jenny’s editor and next chapter changes her mind). So Jenny the villainess and her idiot ex fiancé Liam continue their affair, aurora knows what is going on and she does nothing. Her secret husband slade ends up doing everything for her. Aurora is not a likeable character and I even wonder why she was reborn. She is extremely passive after marrying slade and I have no idea why slade finds her fascinating or lovable. Plotting is slow and characters are one dimensional.