minato and mikoto fanfiction

Good idea but the timeline is a mess...Minato is only around 10 years older than Kakashi (Minato died at 24 and Kakashi was a teenager). But in this novel Mikoto and Fugaku are already married, so around 20, and Kakashi is still far from being born

it's not bad but it borderlines ntr like kushina and mikoto find him attractive and compare him to minato and fugaku which is weird since he's a child but then again the Chinese are weird

I've read this novel....not only timeline is messed up but the story is also dull.... although i like the lite jokes in novel....there is a generation gap between Navaki, Minato, Mikoto, and Fugaku....

please don't drop one of the best minato fanfiction

Sebenarnya bagus, tapi jujur saja aku ingin mc menikahi mikoto sebenarnya bukan yang lain. Jadi mc juga lahir di timeline era mikoto/minato. Namun dimana ia nanti akan mengeliminasi/mencuri bakat sepenuhnya dari minato. (Minato menjadi rakyat biasa saja tanpa prodigy atau genius) Ahggg sialan, jujur saja novel ini konsep yang bagus namun mc kurang kecerdasan politik, pandangan strategis, kurang manipulasi, psikologis dan lain-lain. Maksudku jika diawal mc memiliki segel yang mirip segel akar yang fungsinya untuk menjadikan pion akan lebih bagus. Karena mc butuh boneka diawal. Ahh sayang sekali tidak ada novel yang mewuduhkan fantasiku.