khal drogo and daenerys first time fanfiction
Before there ever was a boy that ever lived in a cupboard on Four Privet Drive, there was a similar boy in a far worse home that lived on Spinner’s End. We all know the tale of that abused boy who grew up to become a bitter spy. But not all tales end the same for in the many parallel worlds that exist in the universe there are far better endings, and equally as many worse ones. This is a tale of one such condemned universe that for better or for worse chooses to change its own fate at through the sacrifice of the bitter spy. (All rights to the Harry Potter world and characters belong solely to J. K. Rowling. However, I do claim creative fanfiction rights. Please do not post my fanfiction elsewhere without my express permission. This work will also be partially hosted at RoyalRoad, Wattpadd, and Archive.)
You want my honest opinion? It's a "meh" read at best. The MC is a major simp for Daenerys, and that somehow doesn't stop him from being a cuck to Drogo. Apart from the NTR and the simp of a man the MC is, the story honestly feels robotic, almost as if prompts were given to ChatGPT, and the response was SLIGHTLY altered/edited. It is an interesting concept to be reborn as TOAA, but author, you truly make the MC seem utterly pathetic.