kyuubi kidnaps kushina fanfiction

"It's a boy Kushina" Nurse 1 "And it's healthy" Nurse 2 "Thank God it's Ok" Minato Namikaze "Can i see him" Kushina Uzumaki "Yes" Nurse 1 "His name is gonna be Naruto" Minato og Kushina You know what happens, Kyuubi gets out and gets controlled by an Uchiha, destroys some of the village, Minato and Kushina dies to protect Naruto aka Black Death, Hiruzen becomes Hokage again and so on. About a year after the kyuubi attack it's more impressive to is it op front than in the manga and anime - Naruto "Rrrrrr" Kyuubi "Yo kid what are you doing here?" Kyuubi "no mucth" Naruto when he came back he had long noticed both the ANBU and ROOT agents. More interraction with the Kyuubi happen later down the line but it's pretty much the same. A hidden underground complex by Konoha "Do you have the bodies" unknown voice 1 (What a trash, do you want us to read this?)

Really not sure how this story has such a high rating. It is honestly a perfect showcase of everything wrong with the novels written on this website. I understand that folks cannot find good fanfiction. Have you all tried spacebattles or fanfic dot net? Even Archive of our own has some good stuff. Just this is not one of them. Perhaps read that Kyuubi fanfic that is on here in which someone is reincarnated as Kyuubi no Kitsune from Naruto and starts off imprisoned in Kushina. That one is well written.

This book is honestly a lot more interesting and better than I thought it would be. I have read other fanfiction with the kyuubi as the main character but not one like this. Keep up the good work.

Aside from a few things I didn't like, it's not bad. It's one of the rare series where the main character genuinely cares about their clan. It's nice that they don't forcefully diminish the intelligence of those around them and allow them to act foolishly simply because they don't like them. But there are a few things I didn't like. First, Minato. At the beginning of the story, the main character was already 16 years old and the same age as Kushina and Minato, meaning they had all graduated, and the relationship between Minato and Kushina was established thanks to Minato saving them, but here it's different. Minato and the main character are portrayed as Kushina's closest friends. However, in the original work, Kushina didn't like Minato because of his kind personality. After Kushina, the main character, and the Uchiha escaped from the village, Minato was chosen as Jinchuuriki, yes. Then he learned the Flying Thunder God technique. In the original work, it's said that he learned the Flying Thunder God technique thanks to Kushina, so it's illogical.Let's say he learned this; controlling his chakra because of the Kyuubi would be extremely difficult, making it impossible for him to use this delicate technique, yet he can use it comfortably. Also, it's impossible for Minato or any ordinary civilian to be the Jinchuuri of the Kyuubi; his physical structure wouldn't allow it, and controlling the Kyuubi would be much more difficult. Secondly, for some reason, the main character names his children the same as in the original work. For example, with Mikoto, he names his first child Itachi, his second Sasuke; with Kushina, his child Naruto; and with Karura, his child Gaara. I don't know what kind of fantasy this is, but I don't like it. Also, it's true that I suffered from post-traumatic stress disorder because of some strange Chinese novels, so I have an aversion to male children. This is more of a personal thing.

A better title might be "Hokage: Why do I keep cuckolding people with these two girls!" Seriously. Story starts with Minato getting ntr'd (Spiritually) by Kushina in her final moments thinking about and muttering her love for another dude. Like, right in Minato's arms. MC appears and saves Kushina at the very last moment and lets Minato die to the Kyuubi. And then Rin shows up as one of his girls too. Full neutral review as I'm barely in the story. But some people will appreciate this warning.