grover x percy fanfic

over all great book with decent length chapters. I am wondering why the author didn't put grover or Tyson in the book except a quick mention at the beginning. but this is one of the better fanfics I have read. it's the best percy jackson fan fic over all.

To be honest it was quite bad at the start, the writing quality, character, and basically everything. However, the one thing that this fanfic does right is the premise, a classic oc fanfic which I really like, it’s just that it wasn’t written very well. However, up til like 100+ I can tell the author had really improved, and so good premise + ok writing skills = good story, however what the author lacks is book knowledge. Like having Grover stand out in the Roman camp despite them having so many fauns completely makes no sense, the characterisation of the Romans makes no sense either. This is supposed to be a percy Jackson fic and not a mythology fix that’s vaguely percy Jackson. So I suppose everything could be fixed if the author knew more about percy Jackson world. However, I do see the author has a lot of potential, he just needs to make sure to have more knowledge of the actual books content

So i have read up till the current chp (that is chp 5) A bit of spoiler in here So after reading i thingk that the writing quality is not bad. This novel i part fanfic and part aufic because there is some elements that was changed from the original series. Our mc is percy's older brother and unlike percy his abillity is more of an water elemental. His special abillity that tells him apart from other poseidon kids is that he can change his body into water (water body), he also have a system, and an unlimited growth in skill as long as he work hard. The reason i say its part aufic is because the fact that mc body can hide demigods scent from monster cause their mother to not marry thhat f4cking pig of a father gabriel( am i right in his name?), Mc also teaches percy how to train his body and mind, control water, and breath in water. The few other reason for i say this is aufic was that percy and mc mother was ALLOWED inside camp halfblood where usually one could enter only if he/she is a demigod, a god, and those who are given access. Oh yeah theres 2 major plothole that i manage to found that is if mc hides demigods scent why percy can still see monsters when the monster have no reason to show their true faces in public? Remember that the reason percy can see monster in his childhood is because they interact directly with percy in a hostile maner if not percy wont be able to see the as how tyson did. So percy should have been really shocked when chiron comes to their home and tells them the they were the sons of god . And then how could poseidon and his sons still get blamed as the lightning thief if mc bloodline hides their demigods status? There is hades kids, nico and his sister that managed to get off the radar from the great calamity prophecy by entering the hades casino where aging stop. (So you know that the great calamity prophecy is like 100x more important than the lightning thief problem) plus how the heck grover and chiron know that mc and percy is a half blood when their scent is gone? Because they are not confronted with monsters, they will never change schools and also means that they will never meet grover.

is this a Percy Jackson fanfic.**********

For those who did not read the book- The book follows the entire story of Percy Jackson, a boy set in modern times who discovers he is a demigod. Son of Poseidon, he was abandoned by his father because of an oath to not father any more kids, since the resulting demigods are too powerful. Percy’s journey turns even more electrifying when he discovers that numerous people and monsters are trying to kill him, as he was the son of one of the big three (Poseidon, Zeus, Hades) who were ultimately forbidden to have any kids. Percy also finds out that there are even more 'Demigods' in Camp Half-Blood at Long Island. With his friend [and romantic interest] Annabeth by his side, his best friend and companion Grover, a satyr, who Percy finds out is actually his bodyguard, his journey across the frightening mystic worlds begins. Percy soon finds himself fulfilling extraordinary quests and fighting battles with the gods