His little cutie is strawberry flavored
There was a master in Yu City's Ninth High School that no one could afford to offend.
Everyone was looking forward to some great god coming to take this lord in. Forget it, how could there be a god?
Until a transfer student came to the school. The big boss seemed to have changed into a different person. He did not smoke, drink, fight, or go to the internet cafe…
The reason was that the girl frowned and pointed at the cigarette in Jiang Si's hand." You're not allowed to smoke. I hate the smell of cigarettes."
Jiang Si threw away the cigarette he was about to light and patted the little girl's head." Okay!"
Then, the little girl added," You're not allowed to drink, you're not allowed to fight, you're not allowed to go to the internet cafe, you're not allowed…"
Jiang Si walked closer and forced the little girl into a corner." What's not allowed? Can I fall in love?"
Wen Mian blushed." No, no."
Jiang Si looked at the little girl's moist lips and his Adam's apple bobbed." But I like you. I can't help it. I want to kiss you."
As soon as he said this, Wen Mian pushed him away and fled.
……
Many years later, Jiang Si asked Wen Mian," At that time, everyone was afraid of me. Why weren't you afraid?"
Wen Mian looked indifferent." Who said I'm not afraid? I was scared, but I didn't dare to say it. I was afraid that you would beat me up."
Jiang Si was speechless.
That night, Wen Mian looked at Jiang Si, who would pounce on her at any time, in a panic. She tried to please him." Master Jiang, let's talk things out. Don't be rash. I'm not afraid of you at all."
Jiang Si smiled." Really? Then I'll make you afraid tonight."
[Domineering and flirtatious study god vs fierce little sheep]
[You don't have to do anything. Just hide behind me obediently!]
Okay, the idea behind this is amazing. But you shouldn't just correct the translation, you should also rewrite some things. Especially the connections to God Valley, because they really hurt the fanfiction in general.