annabeth sleeps in percy's cabin fanfiction

a Percy Jackson ff that's not focused on Percy, Annabeth or Camp half-blood... the story is insane and needs a few thousand chapters more

Very interesting. The author really portrays each character like their original canon self very well. Percy acts like Percy, Annabeth acts like Annabeth. The setting up is done quite well with how each of them got reincarnated in new world. The writing quality itself is really good, though sometimes the descriptions and inner monologue feel a little repetitive in some parts. I always wanted more Percy’s and Calypso’s interactions and developing their relationship more so I hope Perseon, Annara, and Rhaenyra will continue to be together in the future.

I love pjo fanfics but I hate the stereotype of annabeth betraying Percy it feels so wrong when you think about all they went through together in my mind if you want to split them up kill off annabeth and have her be reincarnated so he doesn’t go to the underworld to get her back because in my mind that’s the only way Percy would ever be able to move on to something new

It's good. Very good. Being trained by Athena, saving Thalia, it's great. I would prefer Percy/Athena but it seems Annabeth is favoured. Keep it up. Try not to make Athena too cheerful.

I like the story very much because it's pretty much rare to find a Percy Jakson's Fanfic, even if the main char sometimes got a "awkward" feeling of description but overall I love it how you write about him and annabeth, good luck and wait for the best of this book