"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
I love the story just that u can add more characters to the story and bring constant updates that would be really nice and maybe just maybe u can change the protagonist because I naturally didn't like broly as the main character and also try to add more villains that would even be troubling for broly himself to beat for example when broly said that freiza was nothing for him u can maybe add jiren, tournament of power, top the destroyer and stop making broly look like some lazied assed unbeatable monster pls put my review Into consideration