asleep non consent fiction stories

Copy of a Fan-Fiction without author consent. Copy of a Fan-Fiction without author consent. Copy of a Fan-Fiction without author consent. Copy of a Fan-Fiction without author consent.

What I don't like is how the guy "advances" whenever the girl is asleep. I don't care if they are in love, kissing and touching somebody should have mutual consent.

Overall rather enjoyable read. The author seems to favor certain questionable tropes over others (ie. Non-consent), which might make certain sensitive readers uncomfortable. However, if you know how to separate fiction from non fiction, then this is a book you can definitely finish. However, I do want to point out that there are numerous plot holes in the story, and also plot lines that do not match up. Typically, these would be triggering points for me to drop a novel, but in this case, the characters were immersive enough for me to want to push through and continue with. Another down point is on how the author, when choosing to write about certain topics that people might find important to get right (for example with disabilities and the likes), doesn't research enough on the topic and therefore, paints a very false scenario on how suffering from said disabilities or illnesses are like. But again, if you can separate fiction from non fiction, this point would not bother you either. A solid 3/5 from me.

The stories are interesting and wonderful to read, I'm encouraging all the writers to keep it up. I think I like about literature itself is that it is the mirror of the society and teaches moral whether fiction or non fiction. Reading is life and fun just as the line of the stories are interesting and captivating. May your inkpot never run dry of ideas.

Your writing is really good! The way you carry your characters is almost as if you are documenting non-fiction stories in perfect detail! Can't wait to see how this stories go, keep up the good work!