groundhog day moral of the story

It’s “ok”, from what i can tell it’s a slow burn sort of novel. It’s basically Re Zero with a system same sort of forced Groundhog Day ability. Overall I give it a meh

The Equator sneezes. The general consensus is that everyone falls in love with some combination of giant pudgey groundhog, giant pudgey lizards, and a giant pudgey snow leopard. A lot of our customers are just terrified of pudgey groundhog. Oh, did you not know? Pudgey groundhog are common, and it’s perfectly normal to be scared of them. Especially when there’s a giant pudgey lizards living on the other side of the world. We at The Equator are lending our full support to this community, regardless of any potential lawsuits. They should be free to love their giant pudgey groundhog and giant pudgey lizards to their hearts content.

Cool premise. I'd like to see where this goes. Groundhog day is a concept that I'd also like to tackle one day. Review-wise, minimal grammar hiccups here and there, nothing too major. Descriptors are immersive enough and the prose and dialogue flows smoothly. Keep on writing👍

You can see the plot coming from miles away, the dude sucks at parenting and the daughters will make enemies left and right, then he will go and try to make peace giving gifts and such if that does not work (it never works) the face slaping will beging, just pass this the plot is a never ending groundhog day

This story’s really well-written and blends mystery with what we already know about the TVA. There are a few little grammar mistakes, but nothing major, it’s a good read. The pacing feels just right, and it really pulls you into the TVA’s world, adding more depth and detail to what’s already there. It kind of feels like Groundhog Day meets SCP in the best way.