padme rejects anakin fanfiction

It's good so far. But couldn't you have just written all the gifts the MC got from the ROB in one chapter? Btw who is gonna be part of the mc's harem? I hope Padme is one. I know she is supposed to be Anakin's wife in the future and I like Anakin he's one of my favourite characters in star wars. But Padme's ending kinda sucked. Dying at the hands of Anakin so yeah please add her to the harem!?!?

I really like where this is going, I know this is going to sound really insane but I imagine Atriox ntr Anakin with Padme, I don't know why I thought that

This story has a lot of potential. IT’s hard finding good Anakin centered stories in fanfiction and Webnovel. I look forward to when the story starts opening up.

while the writing is above average for fanfiction the overall plot doesn't make much sense, with characters making choices that are beyond shortsighted and often straight up negligent once or twice a chapter. for a couple examples: 1) why isn't axel immediately taken into the Jedi order? he's 3 years old, as powerful as Anakin and has no attachments. he is literally the holy grail of Jedi padawans, and yet they place more attention on Anakin, what? 2) why do they take axel back to naboo? he's 3 literally every other option is better than todler in a war zone. I know it's just so the author can follow the plot but if you're changing nothing about cannon there's no reason to be there. 3) why isn't Padme at the Senate to spectator Palpatine and everything else? she literally worships buerocracy but instead decides to spend her time with a 3 year old? no. so yeah writings totally fine, but you really need to assess why characters make the choices they make.

Will there be a Mortal Kombat: Obito Uchiha vs Darth Vader? I wonder how Vader and Obito will react to this fight and Luke with Naruto (after all, they literally have a similar history, and Obito is literally the Darth Vader of Naruto's world, and Madara is like Palpatine (he literally used Force lightning against Naruto and Sasuke after the battle with Guy). How will Anakin and Padme react to all this, what will their reaction be when it is mentioned that Luke kissed Leia (you can even mention that this was a reference to the myth of Oedipus (the guy who married his mother, although it could be mentioned (as some kind of fanon or something like that) that Luke was supposed to kiss Padme (well, Lucas could have done this, since Luke repeats the Monomyth about the hero with 1000 faces).And so your fanfic is one of the best in this genre of reactions.