1st grade 100 word story

The novel is pretty good so far but the author loves dragging conversations or inner monologues. Sometimes they take up a third of the chapter. It feels like such a waste. It's also pretty slow paced. 81 chapters and he has not enter the 9th grade realm yet. Martial realms go from lowest to highest, 9th grade-1st grade.

Its surprising to know that this kind of marriage still happens in this modern word, the 21st century or the 1st century of the 3rd millennium. However, this story somehow kept my imagination alive.

The story is really interesting from the 1st word of the chapter to the last word of the chapter. I really sometimes feel what if I could really end up in the game.

It’s good but something doesn’t make sense. The Mac says that, when ur 10 years old ur supposed to be in 1st grade when he ended up in 3rd grade and says that he skipped 2 grades. But that’s wrong cuz when I was 10, I was in grade 5 and so were all my classmates. So basically he’s actually behind by 2 years. So the author is dumb, saying that he was 2 years ahead. But good story line. So, dumb mc, good storyline. Ehh, I’ll give it a try

pretty good so far. I like the world building and am inter st s to see where it goes. Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count