shiny pokemon valuable sold fanfiction

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too... It have system that show stat, give quest, etc (like most system).. But the reward is so great/generous (his luck is so good) with Larvitar, Caterpie, Charmander (all three with variations), great skill or ability (Aura, X-Ray visions, etc).. I like how he's specialist in variation pokemon, it make me can't wait to see what other pokemon he will get (because his pokemon all is uniques or legendaries).. Hope his Feebas egg will hatch soon and become a variation too, maybe shiny, speed, and element (shiny is a must, although his mother got shiny from Team Aqua).. What I don't like is his Aphaty.. Especially after the drama it cause to Joy and Jenny clan.. Hope his pokemon can cure it or at least decreased it so much.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍

this fanfic is amazing. the grammer is perfect with no spelling mistakes and almost zero grammatical error. the protagonist is smart and is ambitious. his family background might not be as influential as oak family but is fairly good. our protagonist drake prioritizes his ambition above all things. he is aspiring to become a dragon master and I must say is doing a great job. he doesn't sympathize with others and is not a hero of justice. he has 4 pokemon which are a dragonair, shiny charmeleon, shiny scizor, shiny tauros but he uses tauros for transportation. his pokemon are much stronger than there species. overall his character is good, he is ambitious, takes care of his pokemon and kills pokemon and humans for the motives if required but is not necessarily evil. this fanfiction has potential to reach on top and i hope it reaches its potential. you have done a great job in making this fanfic author san hope you continue making such progress and please do increase the chapters per-day. thank you and best of luck.

I'm so Impressed with this story. The time line is not too slow and not too fast either, its just right enough for proper character development. I liked how you used an under rated pokemon as a starter because I love Reuniclus, especially Shiny Reuniclus. The Idea of a pokemon farm is so unique and interesting and rarely seen in fanfiction so I appreciate it so much. Keep up the great Work.

Self insert is always about wish fulfilling, the problem is how in this case the author just put non credible coincidence, wild bulbasaur being found 1 day after the mc start his journey. Not to mention the shiny magicarp caught in the first chapter or how every pokemon he wants is hight potential. Overall is a bad quality fanfiction.