elemental fanfic

Great fanfic with good concept. I liked the training methods focused on the elements and elemental transformations, something most fanfic authors don't do. If the protagonist of this work had focused on yin and yang, it would have been perfect.

Aside from the system setting, kimetsu is surprisingly compatible with Naruto. Especially with the breathing techniques used in conjunction with the various elemental styles. This fanfic is definitely a cut above alot of other Naruto and Kimetsu fanfic. I hope the pace keeps up.

It's pretty good so far, fresh kind of power using DFO as the baseline. but I kinda concerned that it will go too OP too fast because the use of elemental power and immortality. but it's still a good fanfic.

will there be elemental Affinitys? and ist it single female lead?

i just realize another the most taboo thing when writing fanfic that is copy the protagonis character. yeah, this fanfic MC copy shin character, the beginning of chapter is when you build MC character, but author just copy shin character, even their reaction is the same.. and honestly MC magic is TRASH! there is no creativity, author just use normal magic that just so boring, when MC can fuse his elemental magic..