hagrid does hermione in fanfic

this a script not a novel example scene 1 in the corridor you will talk with hermione and then cut scene 2 you and hermione will be in the library and talk there and cut scene 3 hagrids hut you will with hagrid along with hermione and cut scene 4 already inside the castle you will with hermione about hagrid you are making a facking script not a novel, the flow of the story is nowhere to be found you cut a part of the story and skipped to the next part

The story is great at the beginning, Harry learning magic with Hermione a fair bit before Hogwarts, However, despite being sorted into Ravenclaw with Hermione, the author still went for the rememberball scene which is confusing because the flight lessons should of been split between houses ( Gryffindor & Slytherin) ( Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff) for whatever reason all the houses except Hufflepuff were present and despite not having any prior interaction with Hagrid, the Author decided for Harry to meet and befriend Hagrid so he can give plot clues. All in all if you plan on changing the plot, it shouldn't line up so closely with the original.

I heard mc isn't involved with hermione romantically so dropping this... . please someone tell me if he does in the later chapters.... somehow Easily the best fanfic of this franchise

it's good but it suffers the same fate as most hp fanfic......always hermione this and hermione that....I still don't understand why the mc is very fixated on hermione

The story is really great much different from what i expected. The i hate abt mc is that he is giving hermione too many chances even after her wat happened @ hagrid's place. Other than that there aint much i feel like i should point out. Keep up the great wrk✌