Soft boss, she broke her character profile again
As the role model of the Space-time Race, Yuan One had always been conscientious in helping each of his hosts successfully clear all the planes.
When she first met Yan Chumiao, the little girl had a pair of round almond-shaped eyes, clear and translucent, and a tender little face, which was very delicate.
Yuan One thought to himself.
This was a delicate, adorable, and weak host.
Less than a minute later, he apologized for disturbing her. His face really hurt!
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Rumor had it that the Yue Family's Di Young Lady was born delicate and beautiful, and was the true flower of wealth in the mortal world. It was just a pity that this body was really a little weak.
Everyone was filled with regret.
Yuan One, who had witnessed his host sitting firmly in the position of the evil female supporting character, thought, This is clearly a true savage flower in the mortal world!
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Jing Rong had always thought that the little girl he liked was weak and needed his protection at all times.
Until one day, at the entrance of an alley.
The delicate little girl formed a sharp contrast with the tragic scene on the ground.
The little girl looked sideways and swept her gaze over. Her round almond-shaped eyes still had traces of hostility that had not dissipated. Her danger level was off the charts.
The little girl raised her eyebrows." What are you waiting for? Hurry up and pack up."
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In the end, someone asked a soul-piercing question.
How did you two end up together?
The male lead touched his face and thought to himself,"I should be the one who's good-looking."
Yan Chumiao thought,'Maybe…I need someone to clean up the scene. After all…I'm a bit of a clean freak.'
Yuan One: The tool man was really hammered.
Yan Chumiao #said the most delicate and soft words, backhanded and stabbed the fiercest and cruelest knife #Everything depends on the mood #Love? Impossible!#
Jing Rong: [You're so love-minded. I'll be wherever Jiaojiao is.]
" Quickly put on 1v1. The female lead is the female goose. The male lead? He should have picked it up at the door, right? In fact, the author has forgotten the details." The author's introduction is useless. For details, look at the main text.
I've been reading it for a long time, and it has become a song.
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The topics and narratives raised are good ...but the novel feels like it's written in a diary or journal form... author can use help to develop the story better... increase dialogues and and reduce simple monotonous narration of events...u can take inspiration from "Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology" by Mithun_ReddyGaru...