tommy wiseau funny story

This story needs an editor. BADLY. To understand the full extent of the problem, try imagining Tommy Wiseau's "The Room", but without the unintended hilarity. Yes, that bad.

Ceritanya keren 😍 Baru berapa bab udah gemetar. apalagi saat tommy mencium andin. Tapi sesaknya saat andin akan mengutarakan perasaanny, tommy malah pergi ke jawa. ya ampun, tommy dikenalin sama gadis lain lagi. Jangan sampai tommy kelain hati ya, kasihan andin😢😢😢

The stars may be average but I must start with saying I enjoyed it and hope to read more. The idea is interesting, what little we’ve seen of the setting is interesting, many of the supporting characters are interesting. The writing is not great, but it’s tolerable. If you can get past the racism, ***ism, and other prejudices that are all over the place in the story, you can find a decently entertaining read. There are multiple scenes and scenarios that drag on way too long, while on the other hand there are many scenes you’d normally expect to be long that end in just a few short sentences. The main character is a strickingly obvious marry sue and is so far at chapter 60 an obvious OPMC, but that doesn’t deter from the overall enjoyment I got from this story. I definitely rolled my eyes or scoffed at innumerable things, but I was hooked, and kept on reading. Give it a chance. It’s bad in the way Tommy Wiseau’s The Room is bad.

I liked the story, the characters are good there are a lot of parts of the story I liked such as the part where hazel and tommy get turned into dolls I just like the story a lot

I wish she got together with tommy for a change insted of a rich man because all romance novels are like poor girl gets rich man andfamily hate or there orphans