"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
I feel something missing in the story some scenes and some feeling are messed up. the part of longh character was not mentioned at all and also tharn's change of feeling of attraction towards type was not specified at all. Trying making it more smooth 🙂