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HP : Mistress of the Dark Arts

Everlasting_93

2022-10-22

Hello, this is Everlasting. I simply want to let everyone know that I welcome feedback and criticism in whatever form. I really hope you enjoy my fan-fiction, and I'd appreciate it if everyone who reads it could give a review.

The Great Bear Mormont

Everlasting_93 · TV

1 Chs

Zbara_1577

2023-05-30

The updates stability can be improved, world building allows more works of fiction to join Anyway real talk This guy deletes actual and proper reviews. I posted one and was deleted a few days ago. Author can't take criticism

Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)

Alittlepiggy33 · TV

440 Chs

The era of familiars has arrived around the world

In one night, all the cities in the world were divided piece by piece, descending into a familiar world. The monsters in the outside world ran about. There were dogs that looked like giant elephants, giants that looked like mountain ranges, strange bears that could tear the earth apart with one hand, and giant eagles that brought about a storm with their wingspans. Humans were trembling under the monsters 'watchful eyes, and they were struggling to survive by taking their own familiars! The global system had descended! The three-month protection period of the main city has begun! After three months, the horde leader level monsters that are waiting outside Shanghai will open their fangs and tear humans apart! At this moment, Li Song realized that his system seemed to be different from others… This Familiar World was also a little similar to one of the games he played… Hence, he decided to do it. Three months later, the protection period would end! When the horde leader level monsters were about to charge into the city to hunt. What appeared before it was the first Lord-tier familiar in human society!

Old Xu 01

· 7.3K Views

Douluo Continent's Unhindered Manipulation

After accidentally transmigrating to the Douluo World, as the plot progressed, Qin Wangyu, who originally wanted to live an ignoble life, realized that he was gradually going against his original goal. What was a king? Glory? A title? Or strength? In the end, it was all born from humans, and I am me. [Note: It was originally written in the early stages, but the outline was changed halfway. Moreover, this book is highly toxic!!!] I beg those who can't take it in, don't look anymore! This book is not a cool novel. Friends who want to read a cool novel can directly swipe away!]

Long Qingyu

· 5.6K Views

Help, I'm dressed like an interstellar big shot.

Crossing the galaxy, a scumbag brought a mistress to his door. He thought that he was a good-for-nothing, but in the end, the Host's alternate identities came one by one. She even forced herself to marry a husband? Scene 1:" Actually, I'm not your sister." After saying that, he looked at his sister seriously. Her sister gave her a hard slap on the head. Third Brother smacked her head. Her father gave her a heads-up. Her mother smacked her on the head. Big Brother wants her to produce evidence Scene 2: Let Go amp;amp;amp;quot; She hugged a man's thigh and said," I won't let go, I won't let go. I don't want to. If you dare to despise me, hmph, I'll call you molestation." amp;amp;amp;quot; &" Go to the doctor and wake up." amp;amp;amp;quot; &" Let me tell you, I'm very sober. You're not allowed to leave until you register your marriage with me today." amp;amp;amp;quot; The System said,[Host, wake up. We still have to brave the world and the sea of stars. Men will affect the speed at which you draw your sword. Wake up. We can raise fish, but don't let them take you away.]

Don't want to hear the snow

· 5.1K Views

[The cannon fodder woman becomes the male lead, White Moonlight]

Mo Qingshui had transmigrated into the book, and she had transfigured into the unfaithful sect leader of the book, Bai Wuyou. She was a perverted old woman who looked like a loli but was actually extremely sinister. As a Nascent Soul Stage Cultivator who relied on seducing the opposite sex to improve herself, and a suicidal female supporting character who repeatedly jumped between the male and female leads, Mo Qingshui refused to follow the plot and began to cultivate in the sect. From then on, Mo Qingshui's daily goal was to do whatever he could not do, so that he could lie flat on his first place. He had thought that his perfect villain persona would be ruined by him, but who knew that he would end up in a position that everyone was envious of. In the book, the powerful female protagonist, who was unapproachable by all, protected her; In the book, Long Aotian, the male protagonist who tortured her half-dead, was her cheat. He wanted to pull her up to the sky and stand side by side with the sun. Even the three big villains who had been on the ground for days had come forward to wash her feet. Mo Qingshui laughed maniacally with a good hand.

the last rose

· 8.3K Views

Cute, give me some

In a Chinese and foreign competition, Team S had fought their way out. This time, they were the champions. Whether it was the audience in the stadium or the audience outside the stadium, everyone was cheering. The next second, the MVP's face appeared on the big screen. The man held the trophy and tilted his head slightly to the microphone in the host's hand. His eyes were fixed on the camera, and his magnetic voice echoed throughout the audience. “The winner is king。” The winner was king. We are the winners, and China is the king. * One night, Shen Qi called Memorial. "Hello? Commemoration." The other side was silent for a while. Shen Qi was about to continue with a memorial when he spoke. "How much?" Shen Qi: "???" How much? "What are you talking about?" Shen Qi frowned and asked. "So you're not here to borrow money." Memorial took a deep breath as if it was important. "Why did you say that I came to borrow money?" Shen Qi asked. Shen Qi heard the door close on the other end of the phone. Then, he answered," Usually, when people who haven't contacted you for a long time suddenly call, 90% of them are here to borrow money." Shen Qi was speechless.

Tangling

· 5.3K Views