tony and pepper's daughter fanfiction

this needs to be continued it's rare for there to be a reincarnation, as the daughter or son of Tony stark for Marvel.

This book was awesome the plot never got stale or felt like it was being dragged the characters were well flushed out the smut was nicely done and not over the top and I really enjoyed this version of Tony Stark and I especially enjoyed this version of Pepper I can’t wait to check out more of your books

the story is quite lacking, most of the plot is too forced like when his mother died and suddenly the ancient one is visiting so he can train his ability, the timeskip also didnt help as it feels reading a summary rather than a story then you suddenly add tony stark out of the blue, and just like with other conversations they speak like robot or badly written script from a 3rd rate author, pepper alrrady demanded that he speak with tony immediately, she should first ask if he's already fine first or if he needs any thing, your mc is a robot and everyone else is a robot

just another chinese translation, and a clich MC, dude got a powerful AI, but still don't know how to use it, acts like a 10 yrs. old boy who knows nothing, and why the hell he wants to be friends with tony so much and dude seriously pepper will learn chinese cuisine from a random old chinese restaurant owner

Hey I went to the original Qidian and found out Tony’s name in the Chinese version is Tony Dunn not Tony Twain that’s where Dunn came from. That’s why here Tony calls the original Tony in his original body Dunn.